Re-crafting

Hi,This is a about Re-crafting,What we had to do in Literacy class was we had to do re-crafting on our presentation that I am going to show you. If you did not know re-crafting is re-writing what you have given ,but to make it better & to have more detail. Just like that task we have been given was...
My neighbor's granddaughter,Adrianna,came over .It was a sunny day and we were so hot so we went swimming.

We had to change that writing in to a much better one that can show more detail about what we were going to do or how we felt.The yellow writing is me and my partner one that we have changed and made it our own,so please leave me a comment about what you think about my writing and my class mate writing.

Intro:Statistics

Hello this is all about my statistics and it is how we use steam and leaf graph.. There is a game that you can play so you can learn about Mean,Median,Mode and Range,the game is could BAMZOOKI.. Please leave me a comment.Thank you..

2015 Reflection

Hi,Have you ever had to write a whole recount about 2015,well that is why I am here to tell you all about my year.By the way can you please leave me a comment please thank you.

Have you ever had a good whole year?Well did you know that this whole years was the best & that we went on different kind of trips such as polyfest,Rainbows end,Parakai & much more.If you are wondering why I am telling you this,it is because you know what the years 7 & 8 have experince.

This whole years was the best,It made me feel proud of myself and so happy.I wish we could not go back,but only stay in this year one more time. My satisfying thing was meeting new teacher in team 5 ,such as Mr Wiseman,Miss Peat & Ms Hockley,they have been the best teachers.

The frustrating or difficult thing was trying new thing I have never ever done before such as going to rainbows end,that was my first time in ever going to rainbows end. If I could ever grade myself by being awesome it would have been 9 out of 10,because it has been a rough year.  

Well the thing that I have participated in was Netball,Cross Country finals ,Athletics competitions, & much more,those thing were so good for me and it really helped me to get better at things and to get better at sports. In 2016 next year I would change myself by participating in different kind of sport and to do my best to help kids that are hurt & that need help with work.

If you did not know I really love to do maths & writing those are my favourite thing to do when I am at school. Maths has always been in me but sometime I can work the problem out or sometime I can not ,that is why I want to keep doing maths.Writing is the best because I get to write a lot & to write what I have experience,writing has helped me a lot,other thing I am good at is helping people that are stuck, & reading is the best it has really really helped me as well because If I can not understand a word it may help me by seeing different kinds of meanings.

Maybe I could have more help with writing,maths & reading,It may help me to get better & to be the best,better than I am right now.

By the way that is what I have for you  right now about 2015,but I will be back next year telling you about 2016 & that is my last year at pt england school,but I mean next year is my last year,you know what I mean right...

The Revolting Room

Hi Have you ever had a room that looked so revolting well we have been writing a poem about a dirty room, our title is called !!!THE REVOLTING ROOM!!! I hope you like it and by the way I wroked with my group and I think we did a good job and worked hard as a team. Here is our poem please leave me and my group a comment thank you.

Suvivors

Hi have you ever made your own poem well me and my partner have made our own poem and it is all about suvivor. You can read it and pleases leave me a comment thank you..

All About The Word "THEME"

Hello I am here to tell you everything about the word "THEME" If you did not what a theme is,well that is why I am here so I can help you all about the word theme...Please leave me a comment and write how you feel and if it has helped you...

The day I lost my Phone

Did you know that we have been writing about something that got lost and my one is all about a time my phone got lost.Please leave me a comment.

The day I lost my  Phone …….

It was a beautiful sunny day, and my mum had brought me I new phone for my birthday. Then she took me to the movies to watch born to dance I also took my phone with me. While I was waiting for the movies to start I sat down and I was playing with my phone. Finally the movie started so I put my phone into my pocket.

Then a few hours later the movie was finished we got out of the movies and jumped in the car just as we got home I went to crab my phone out of my pocket when suddenly my phone was gone. I told my mum and then she was yelling at me saying “That was your new phone you better find it or else you won’t get another phone again or ever”.

After that I asked my mum if she can take me back to the movies. I arrived at the movies looking everywhere but still no sign of my phone. I went to ask the people that worked there but they said” they have not seen it too”. I sat down crying my eyes out. It was the best birthday present I ever had.

Just then looking in the bins I found my phone it was covered in popcorn I told my mum and she was so happy we went home. I was talking to my mum say “ sorry for losing my phone it will not happen again”.

I felt so happy finding my phone and having the best birthday present for my mum.At the end me and my mum where laughing about a funny video and she was happy that I was happy.