Re-crafting

Hello,I am going to show you my writing about re-crafting and it is really good and I am really proud of it because I have been working on it for long. What we had to do was we had to change up the task we have been given and make it in to a much better one and to make sure there is not that much I's or even other words. This can help me with my work and I will no how to do re-crafting and I can do much better. So please leave me a comment and see how you think about my writing.

Topic:

As I sat on the dock,I felt something tugging on my line.I tried pull it up but it felt like I was being pulled in. I tried to think of what to do. I looked around but there was no-one to help me.

Writing:

Problem:

As I sat near the wet and smelly dock,I had just felt something tugging on my rod.After a few small times I tried pulling it up but it felt like it was dragging me in. As I sat there for just a bit I was thinking of what to do. Just then I looked everywhere to see if there was someone to help me but there was no-one….

Solution:

After a while my hands started to get really sore, as I slowly took one of my hand off the rod it looked like it was going to come off…

I kept trying to pull my rod but it would not come up, all I could feel was something big.

Just then I could hear kids, but they were not far from me. As they were coming I yelled out “CAN YOU PLEASE HELP ME!!” When they came over we were pulling so hard it felt like we were all going to end up in the water. As we pulled the rod up, their was something at the end of my line and it was the biggest fish I have ever seen... THE ENDS

Re-crafting

Hi,This is a about Re-crafting,What we had to do in Literacy class was we had to do re-crafting on our presentation that I am going to show you. If you did not know re-crafting is re-writing what you have given ,but to make it better & to have more detail. Just like that task we have been given was...
My neighbor's granddaughter,Adrianna,came over .It was a sunny day and we were so hot so we went swimming.

We had to change that writing in to a much better one that can show more detail about what we were going to do or how we felt.The yellow writing is me and my partner one that we have changed and made it our own,so please leave me a comment about what you think about my writing and my class mate writing.

Intro:Statistics

Hello this is all about my statistics and it is how we use steam and leaf graph.. There is a game that you can play so you can learn about Mean,Median,Mode and Range,the game is could BAMZOOKI.. Please leave me a comment.Thank you..

2015 Reflection

Hi,Have you ever had to write a whole recount about 2015,well that is why I am here to tell you all about my year.By the way can you please leave me a comment please thank you.

Have you ever had a good whole year?Well did you know that this whole years was the best & that we went on different kind of trips such as polyfest,Rainbows end,Parakai & much more.If you are wondering why I am telling you this,it is because you know what the years 7 & 8 have experince.

This whole years was the best,It made me feel proud of myself and so happy.I wish we could not go back,but only stay in this year one more time. My satisfying thing was meeting new teacher in team 5 ,such as Mr Wiseman,Miss Peat & Ms Hockley,they have been the best teachers.

The frustrating or difficult thing was trying new thing I have never ever done before such as going to rainbows end,that was my first time in ever going to rainbows end. If I could ever grade myself by being awesome it would have been 9 out of 10,because it has been a rough year.  

Well the thing that I have participated in was Netball,Cross Country finals ,Athletics competitions, & much more,those thing were so good for me and it really helped me to get better at things and to get better at sports. In 2016 next year I would change myself by participating in different kind of sport and to do my best to help kids that are hurt & that need help with work.

If you did not know I really love to do maths & writing those are my favourite thing to do when I am at school. Maths has always been in me but sometime I can work the problem out or sometime I can not ,that is why I want to keep doing maths.Writing is the best because I get to write a lot & to write what I have experience,writing has helped me a lot,other thing I am good at is helping people that are stuck, & reading is the best it has really really helped me as well because If I can not understand a word it may help me by seeing different kinds of meanings.

Maybe I could have more help with writing,maths & reading,It may help me to get better & to be the best,better than I am right now.

By the way that is what I have for you  right now about 2015,but I will be back next year telling you about 2016 & that is my last year at pt england school,but I mean next year is my last year,you know what I mean right...

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