When we got to Kelly Tarlton’s, the first thing we did was go to the school room with Janice. She was showing us photos about Antarctica. She talked about what the scientists use to keep them warm and what they eat. Janice told us that “all the rubbish comes back to New Zealand and doesn’t stay in Antarctica”.
The sun was shining brightly in the sky as we walked to the park.Me and my friends were playing on the octopus”.It soared in the sky as we played on the octopus.I didn’t get my turn on the octopus because there were people hogging it. The tall wet grass was so wet that our shoes and socks we squished and soggy.
Our class and Room 16 walked back to Kelly Tarlton’s to explore the oceanarium. We went to the look at scotts hut, Janice told us about the cans of food and we saw a replica of it. Then we went to look around at the other animals too. When we got to the fish, we saw a man and he told us that the starfish was real. There were some big fish and little tiny fish too. Me,Ashley,Lukis,and Taiaha were on the travelator under a tunnel with see through glass of fish. We saw sharks, stingrays and big fish too.They were scary. It was so fun on the travelator. We got some time to go on our Chromebooks and start writing. Afterwards it was time to come back to school.
I felt really happy that i went to the Kelly Tarlton's. It was so fun and I hope that I can go again with my friends too. My favorite part was when we went to the park and played on the octopus and when we were eating our morning tea.
Great writing Juliet. I liked the complex sentences you have included. Well done!
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