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Friday 2 August 2013

Holly and the Frog Prince

This is a story about a girl named holly she lived with her mum.One night holly’s mother read her a story about a princess who kissed a frog.When holly’s mother said the part when the princess kissed the frog holy said that is revolting and yucky.That night it rained and rained and it rained in till the rains stopped.Holly went outside to play in her sandpit.When she saw a frog sitting in her sandpit.She told the frog to get out of her sandpit but the frog was just sitting in her sandpit.She was thinking about kissing the frog so it can turn into a beautiful prince but she thought that it will be yuck to kiss a frog.So then she kissed the frog and it turned into a ugly prince.Then she kissed the prince and it turned back into a frog.Then she went back home.The End.

2 comments:

  1. Great job retelling Juliet. Some of your sentences need checking again but you wrote really well.

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