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Monday 30 November 2015

The Revolting Room

Hi Have you ever had a room that looked so revolting well we have been writing a poem about a dirty room, our title is called !!!THE REVOLTING ROOM!!! I hope you like it and by the way I wroked with my group and I think we did a good job and worked hard as a team. Here is our poem please leave me and my group a comment thank you.
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  1. Rowana4 December 2015 at 10:48

    Hey Juliet,
    What a great blog post about the REVOLTING ROOM. Man if that happened to my room It will feel like I am going to DIE!!! anyways like the way you put lots of information on your post. Keep it up

    Rowana

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  2. Unknown18 January 2016 at 11:10

    Hi Juliet (and team),

    Wow, this is quite an interesting poem! You have really captured the feeling of entering a room that is utterly revolting!

    I really love poetry and I think that it's a great way to express yourself. If you are interested in writing more poetry, please consider joining the Summer Learning Journey. On Day 5 (Week 2) there is an activity where you are asked to imagine what it would feel like to arrive in a brand new country. You are also invited to take a selfie that captures your feelings. I posted a selfie on the site of myself looking a bit anxious and scared! How do you think that you might feel?

    If you're keen to join us, and post a poem or selfie, please do. The Summer Learning Journey website is: https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/.

    You can log in and complete activities anytime. I'll be monitoring the website and blogposts for another full week so there is plenty of time to join in!

    Hope to see you online soon :)

    Rachel

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