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Tuesday 16 April 2013

My Omaru river

Once upon a time there was an eel that lived in a river named Omaru river with it family and friends.One day these kids came to Omaru river and swam in it the river the river was clean.Then one day the river was polluted with rubbish,ball,poles,.Then this class went to see the river then the class was eating there lunch near the river the classroom was throwing there rubbish in the river.Then they went to there classroom the the eels were playing then the water started to get polluted it was bad because the eels ,fish,tadpole ,and other this that live in the water some of the fish,eels and some of the fish and eel died the eels name was inedera and his dad name was nathan his mother name was rachael she had three sister’s there name was juliet and shea her friends were fish they always play together but her friend’s died because the water was filled with rubbish.THe eels went to the ocean to get some food for there family and friend when they came back from the ocean the eel sure the fish died at the bottom of the water they sure the fish there friends that was so sad and then eels went to buy some food at the shop because they had a shop at the ocean the she went to buy some food for the table because they had a funeral .At there big house that had a big back yard they were setting the things up for the funeral and were puting the food on the table then they buried them in the ground then they and something to eat and then the fish mum and dad came back home from there trip they sure the eels doing the fish they were putting the fish in a whole to buried they in the ground then the mother said what happen the the the eels said that when they went to the ocean they came back they sure them at the bottom of the water then the mother started to cry and then the mother and father had something to eat and then they went to bed. THE ENd.

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