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Wednesday 24 February 2016

Re-crafting

Hi,This is a about Re-crafting,What we had to do in Literacy class was we had to do re-crafting on our presentation that I am going to show you. If you did not know re-crafting is re-writing what you have given ,but to make it better & to have more detail. Just like that task we have been given was...
My neighbor's granddaughter,Adrianna,came over .It was a sunny day and we were so hot so we went swimming.

We had to change that writing in to a much better one that can show more detail about what we were going to do or how we felt.The yellow writing is me and my partner one that we have changed and made it our own,so please leave me a comment about what you think about my writing and my class mate writing.

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